Fatherhood ought to be emphasized as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?
Due to women's biological capacity for childbearing, there is a widespread of the stereotype that mothers are responsible for children upbringing themself. From my own perspective, I totally oppose this prejudice and I will point out evident justifications for the equal importance of father care in family education.
On the one hand, mother care is indispensable to children's life. Firstly, women are likely to be more gentle and patient than men, which is a crucial reason why mother has been traditionally expected to be the best nurturer. Mother's roles are highly recognized in the first years of children development progress as women have inborn mom skills to distinguish the goodness among various surrounding harmful factors. Furthermore, because of the close relation between mother and children when they were born, mother seems to be a good listener than father. They understand their children's needs and spiritual life not only in toddler period but also in adolescent years later.
However, father's responsibilities have become a great contributor to child-rearing in comtemporary life. A father, who has a strong mind and play the role of a breadwinner, would have positive influences on his children's sense of industry, competence and reponsibility. Children would be taught to believe that their successes and failures are due to their own efforts rather than due to extenal factors by their father's life story. Last but not least, with men's physical advantages in terms of body size and strength, father could be a friend of his children in every kind of outdoor activities and help his children build strong social relationships during childhood and later in life.
All things considered, I once again reaffirm my position that mother and father both share the equally important duties in children upbringing and educating
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33561643836 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0049452579 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626712328767 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2979181853 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.833333333 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154533986024 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625649401223 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462788338652 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.091220520854 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048868862891 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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