A few languages are increasingly spoken in different countries, while the usage of others is rapidly declining. Is this a positive or a negative development?
We now live in the world where people con connect to each other no matter how far we live thanks to the Internet.Because of its benefit, people aim to use languages which are common such as English, French, Mandarin and Spanish to communicate even at the workplace or on the network.That leads to a few languages are spoken by more people and other languages are used less. From my point of view, the popular languages should be widely used in this modern age.
Firstly, people can easily communicate with each other by using the same language. It will cut the language barrier between people . For example, in multinational company, employees need to have foreign languages like English to improve their working efficiency. Secondly, the same language will make people easier to approach the knowledge around us because the more common of the language is the more information, which is written in that language, we can get. Moreover, children can acquire the language with less time and effort if many people and media apply them. The example for that is cartoon shows effect the mindset of children many that will shape their words, intonation and influence.
On the other hand, there are some negative sides. One of those is the uncommon languages which are traditional languages and were created for thousands of years that contain an unique spirit. Moreover, the different generations will have difficulties in learning new languages. For instance, our grandparents will not understand the foreign languages and they cannot get the new languages if people keep reject the traditional ones.
In conclusion, although the special culture that traditional languages have and the difficulties about languages between generations. Widespread languages should be used as the extra languages for the need at workplace and international communication, which is indispensable part of development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 114, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Because
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: That
...even at the workplace or on the network.That leads to a few languages are spoken by ...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... cut the language barrier between people . For example, in multinational company, ...
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Line 5, column 175, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ted for thousands of years that contain an unique spirit. Moreover, the different ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29181494662 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94368107763 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572953736655 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.9515890104 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.384615385 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169571193183 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674422173528 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0301018842744 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111096917743 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261655318522 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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