Few people devote time to hobbies nowadays. Say why you think this is the case and what effect this has on the individual and society in general.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Hobbies are a vital part of an individuals life as they can act as stress reliving method for some or a source of earning for others. But nowadays, only few people devote their time to hobbies and there are various reasons why this situation is persisting in modern world with notable effects on an individual and society as whole.
Overall, assigning time to hobbies is not subjective to entertainment but can also be beneficial for a person or community. But, due to the radical changes in lifestyle and technology people have found certain new ways of unwinding themselves. In today's hectic world, the launch of mobile phones, televisions and computers made life more convenient for mankind and people prefer watching movies or playing games with family rather than giving time to their hobbies. Moreover, instead of having a self dedicated leisure time, some individuals even prefer visiting malls with their family or friends so that they can spend quality time with family. For example, a working professional gets only one day leave in entire week, so he would prefer spending time his family to strengthen the bond rather than being selfish and offering time to individual leisure activity.
However, few people devoting time to hobbies has not affected society at large because it's an individuals choice where to dedicate his time. Although, it might lead to criticism from some family members if the person stops allocating time for his own leisure activity and becomes indolent. Even individual might go through additional stresses of pleasing and maintaining relationships with the family or others causing emotional and intellectual imbalance.
In conclusion, devoting time to hobbies has become rare today due to additional responsibilities of work and family and invention of other types of relaxation methods but individuals should consider giving a sometime for their own development and leisure to keep themselves mentally stable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 32, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
Hobbies are a vital part of an individuals life as they can act as stress reliving...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, then, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30868167203 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78455849044 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604501607717 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.8442201363 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.090909091 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2727272727 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22589565774 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939909857958 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690554772533 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155277902494 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541524838936 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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