Few people devote time to hobbies nowadays. Say why you think this is the case and what effect this has on the individual and society in general.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Some may considered that giving an excessive amount of time to hobbies is can be negative impact on the people, personally and socially in these recent days. It seemed to me that there are few causes lead to such an issue, and some relevant effects can be meet with individuals and societies.
Possibly the main cause is heavy workload on the workplace, thus make people avoid from hectic schedule they have even it is weekend or late hour at night. Doing leisure activities might give them inevitable refreshment, relaxation and opportunity to stick with family, which can be led them a better performance in all round formal achievements. The example of the Google LLC can be cited that employees have a specific off-day to go hiking in the early morning before their official work hour starts, and average rate of the end result assessment had risen to the peak. Another well-known cause is intention to get more income from what they enjoy to do in the technology focused world, as it is not limited to be a freelance. The use of cryptovalues is a brilliant example of this type of hobby makes much more dollar they had in the past.
Firstly, the majority of spare time activities require money to some extent. If job holders did not spend enough time for whether work or education, their salary would lessen conscientiously to somewhat. A further widely observed impact on individual is various addiction related to bet in a different way ranging from e-game, sport tournament to alcohol, tobacco even illegal substances. This products and actions exacerbate person`s overall wellbeing such as mental health and physical abilities. Finally, on the society, depends on actitivies are done by people who tend to go suburbs an erosion, water decontamination and deforestation might be experienced, in spite of, adequate social work to preserve nature rather than just destroy surrounding.
Overall, gruelling schedule and money-conscious man are the main cause to pay great amount of time for hobbies, and they affect both individuals and environment in the area affected.
- The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in a country in 1950 and 2010 Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below 78
- Bullying is a big problem in many schools What do you think are the causes of this What solutions can you suggest Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 84
- The bar graph shows the global sales in billions of dollars of different types of digital games between 2000 and 2006 Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the 78
- Few people devote time to hobbies nowadays Say why you think this is the case and what effect this has on the individual and society in general Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 89
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 115, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[3]
Message: Possible agreement error – use past participle here: 'evened'.
Suggestion: evened
...le avoid from hectic schedule they have even it is weekend or late hour at night. Do...
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Line 3, column 645, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'enjoy doing'.
Suggestion: enjoy doing
...ntion to get more income from what they enjoy to do in the technology focused world, as it ...
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Line 5, column 288, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a different way" with adverb for "different"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ual is various addiction related to bet in a different way ranging from e-game, sport tournament t...
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Line 5, column 390, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
...cohol, tobacco even illegal substances. This products and actions exacerbate person&...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, may, so, thus, well, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1746.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09037900875 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87745206467 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644314868805 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.366688716 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.307692308 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3846153846 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136389539585 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459205756929 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0252683820639 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0777444349518 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0138215262756 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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