Fewer and fewer people walk on a daily basis. What are the reasons and how to encourage them to spend their time walking?
It is a fact that walking is good for our health, also it is a way to slow down and enjoy our life. However, in recent years, there is a common trend that people become less inclined to have a walking exercise regularly. Firstly, this essay will discuss some reasons for this trend and secondly, this essay will offer several methods to motivate more people walking.
The principal cause of the lack of people’s interest in the walking activity is technological advances in moving. As a result, some technological applications which support moving such as elevators are very prevalent in public places. This machine allows people to move to different floors of a building more easily and quickly. Another reason, fitness centers have full of modern exercise devices with cheap cost and professional trainers. Walking exercise is more tedious than go to gyms where people can use different exercising machines, meet and make friends.
There are a variety of potential ways to tackle this problem. Companies should encourage laborers to take stairs instead of elevators, walk a part of their journey to work and educate them the importance of walking. For instance, workers can make habits to increase walking time like using means of transport or parking in places far from their company. Companies also can organize walking competitions with prizes to improve the heath of their worker.
In conclusion, It is clear that there are various reasons for fewer and fewer people walk on a daily basis. solutions need to be taken to promote the benefits of walking.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 109, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Solutions
...and fewer people walk on a daily basis. solutions need to be taken to promote the benefit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05791505792 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62510217548 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606177606178 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.0514600633 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.5714285714 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316123808898 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0976975675515 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117060802037 0.0667982634062 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194655698517 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0991918596277 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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