Films were produced by big companies in the past, but today people are able to make a film. Is this a negative or positive development?
The film industry has been dominated by several giant companies so far until these days when more and more people choose to make a film solely. This phenomenon comes with both advantages and disadvantages, which will be discussed in this essay.
It is obvious that when people tend to make films on their own, there are more possibilities for exploring hidden talent in the filmmaking industry. When a person has an opportunity to create a film product, it also is an opportunity to explore himself; thus, hidden talents in filmmaking might be found. Moreover, solely making films gives filmmakers a valuable chance to express themselves. For instance, “4 years, 2 guys, 1 love” is a debut film of a young director - Luk Van - who also is an investor and producer of this film. Since Luk participated in almost all the production stages, the film was strongly imbued with her personal identity. Besides, more people involved in the filmmaking industry means that the market is becoming more and more competitive. In other words, big companies have to try to raise the quality of their product to compete with their emerging rivals.
On the other hand, the phenomenon also poses a handful of problems. Due to the fact that indie filmmakers are not professional and have a low cost, their products might be low-quality films. The lack of money prevents the film crew from applying advanced techniques or films at beautiful places; therefore, the film’s quality might not be as good as expected and might disappoint the audience. Furthermore, independently making a film might cause several copyright and censorship problems since the indie filmmaker crews might take some others’ sources in their products without permission.
In summary, the merits of independent filmmaking evidently outweigh its demerits. However, people should be careful when making a film in order to avoid any unnecessary trouble.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 448, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun copyright seems to be countable; consider using: 'several copyrights'.
Suggestion: several copyrights
...independently making a film might cause several copyright and censorship problems since the indie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in summary, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1935483871 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82720650943 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596774193548 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3513580811 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.333333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.06666666667 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261064478485 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907820670697 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06846074575 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168023770787 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050394526711 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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