Films were produced by big companies in the past, but today people are able to make a film. Do you think this trend is positive or negative?
While the film industry is increasingly popular, it continues to be rather controversial because people can create films easily with the rapid advancement of technology. Although many people are concerned about the negative effect of this trend, I still have an optimistic view of it and I will explain why.
There are several reasons why allowing people to film anything they want brings many drawbacks. Firstly, they are afraid that their privacy can be under threat because high-tech can help to record everywhere. If a film whose sensitive and confidential content is leaked to the public, it might become a catastrophe for the owners. Secondly, some bad guys film their jobs such as fighting and debt collection by violent and they post it to the social network. As a result, many parents scare that it affects very badly to the children psychology, and the consequences are significant.
Nonetheless, I believe that trend towards doing something has benefits to people lives with affordable cameras and smartphones. Firstly, shooting films itself is a fascinating and utterly harmless activity, it allows people to keep their wonderful memorable around them. They can share these happy moments with their friend or someone else to make the world better. Furthermore, teachers can record their lectures to supplement presentations to help students, if they cannot attend the class and need to self-study. These videos are an invaluable resource of knowledge for all people who want to expand their minds through the internet such as YouTube channel or some online courses. Those are great things that personal films do to people.
In conclusion, not only has made films no longer been the sole privilege of big companies, but it has also become a positive trend that many individuals can enjoy. I personally believe that it has both positive and negative at the same time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, still, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22772277228 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76165259378 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627062706271 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4999823633 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.6 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24186633016 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786981183839 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566287543989 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157172178396 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458005119109 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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