Some people think that mental strength is the most important factor for success in sports. However, some others believe that it is more important to have strong and fit people. Discuss both views and give your opinions.
Some people believe that mental strength is of the utmost importance to win in sports. However, some others are opposed to this idea, physical fitness is the key to success. There are valid arguments on both sides, which I will discuss now.
On the one hand, a strong mentality is essential for any sportspeople to be successful. In reality, virtually all sports entail intense competitions and pressure, so only strong-willed players who is able to handle those problems well can become a winner. For example, elite athletes such as Roger Federer, who is widely regarded as one of the greatest players of all time in tennis, is a perfect example of players in remaining calm and confident regardless of situations. With his mental prowess, he created interesting matches with fighting back from the break down to win even if he was not in good physical condition. As a result, the mental toughness of Federer has been proven to be a game-changing factor in his matches.
On the other hand, physical strength is often considered a very important element in sports. Most players are required to be physically fit so that they are able to physically challenging actions commonly found in the majority of sports. For instance, Cristiano Ronaldo, who is renowned for being one of the most athletic players in football history, trains for brute strength, muscle size and endurance day by day to have a robust body. Therefore, his extraordinary strength made rivals wary because he can run faster than any player. Eventually, Ronaldo scored easily, and now he is holding the record for most goals in his career.
In conclusion, it is ludicrous to compare mental strength with physical fitness because they are both equally important and instrumental in the overall success in sports.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03716216216 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79296692824 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597972972973 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0080405573 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.5 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266157050541 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960355151357 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090041601425 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187826192296 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104494734292 0.056905535591 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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