the first man to walk on the moon said it was a great step for mankind. But space travel has made little difference in most people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree
It is true that traveling to space has a little impact on the vast majority of inhabitants since the first time human-beings were able to foot on the moon. While many people agree with this view, I would argue that the benefits of this breakthrough milestone cannot be underestimated.
It is obvious that the merits of such a great event cannot see immediately. Firstly, scientists have to take a long period of time to invest in novel samples that have been collected from the moon in order to answer the question of whether there was life on that planet. This would help us understand more about the universe where we have kept holding a belief that it would have been aliens living parallel with us in this universe. Secondly, new findings of space satisfied mankind's curiosities. In other words, it has broadened human horizons as well as discovered new interesting information. We may even make friends with aliens to exchange cultures and pieces of knowledge about the universe if the hypothesis that aliens were available is true
Furthermore, as the problem of overpopulation is becoming popular in metropolises, finding new places for citizens could shelter in is significantly essential. If it is proved that people could inhabit other planets like the moon, residents would be less worry about lacking accommodations in the future. Besides, the first walk on the moon would give an enormous incentive for astronauts to stay focus on their journey to discover other planets that have not any footsteps yet. They might find some relations between planets and have more experience in traveling to space.
In conclusion, while it is said that there have been a few differences in people's lives since astronauts first walked on the moon, it seems to me that the positive effects of this phenomenon cannot be overlooked.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...lected from the moon in order to answer the question of whether there was life on that planet. This wou...
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...sis that aliens were available is true Furthermore, as the problem of overpopul...
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...more experience in traveling to space. In conclusion, while it is said that the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, in conclusion, as well as, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01639344262 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82311265506 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573770491803 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.0212963667 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.5 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4166666667 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.75 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179759094652 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657047579309 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501266277365 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121119368808 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421665573285 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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