Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

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Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is quite common these days for foreign travelers in some countries to have an unfair treatment from tourism costs between local travelers. Personally, I totally agree foreigners should not pay more than domestic tourists.
Keeping price balanced between locals and foreigners plays an important financial role in local cities. foreigners may think that it is unsuitable to continue tourist in china and they may find it difficult to readapt to an expensive travel price, if they are noticed that the costs are highly than before. in addition, we got that foreign visitors not only charge their admission fees but also pay more extra money in traffic tickets, foods, hotels and so on, which shows that they create revenues and stimulate local economic and even improve local people standard of life.
That is the best way for tourist sector to make a reasonable fairly price without any prejudice for every tourist. For another, the number of tourist may reduce if tourist sector not cater for needs of travelers through by charge foreign visitors more. Moreover, foreign visitors bring incomes has become a driver of economic growth and create employment. If they not choice our country go sightseeing, the scene of tourist boom would not again in the short distant future.
In conclusion, charge foreign travelers would not have the desired results. It is useless for government to develop local economic or people live qualities.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, in addition, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1206.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15384615385 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47608179988 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619658119658 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7246773828 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.636363636 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2727272727 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238209937293 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0951552697036 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675882479462 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145114400633 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438790784647 0.056905535591 77% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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