Fossil fuels are essential for producing electricity, powering industry and fueling transportation. However, one day we will reach a point when all the world’s fossil fuels have been depleted.
How can we conserve these resources?
What are some alternatives to fossil fuels?
Since the industry began to develop environmental problems have been becoming one of the most important issues. Fossil fuels are needed and used in different areas of manufacturing and the moment will come when the fuels will disappear from the Earth. This essay will discuss combustible’s disjunctives and the best way to preserve the wealth.
To begin with, reasonable consumption of fuel will succor (help) to save it for a longer period of time. If people understand resources no needing to use them everywhere and try to keep it for future, it will rescue (extricate, save) humanity. For example, the local famous newspaper “Human and Nature” bestow (provide) statistics that refusing to use firewood in at least one of the regions will extricate it for 70 years ahead. Hence, mankind should comprehend (understand) the majority of this problem and begin to take actions such as the ability to cherish (хранить) what they have.
Moreover, people invent similar things that will replace one of the main hoards. Hydrogen fuel cells, solar paint, wave energy and whisky are the only substitutes already created. For instance, our world can surrogate (substitute, supersede) cars which(?) ride with fuel and create ones that move due to charge from sunlight or eliminate personal transports altogether. Thus, the Earth has already owned certain alternatives and possessing it is an adequate (good) way to solve the issue.
Taking everything into consideration, fuel loss will be one of the biggest messes (problem) that human race requires to start solving now. To my mind, the ability to use a source of energy and replacing it with more economical things will save the amount of combustions and make it possible to wield (use) it in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Since the industry began to develop environme...
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Line 2, column 88, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ill succor help to save it for a longer period of time. If people understand resources no need...
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Line 3, column 252, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Ride
...ogate substitute, supersede cars which? ride with fuel and create ones that move due...
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Line 4, column 116, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'starting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: starting
...messes problem that human race requires to start solving now. To my mind, the ability to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, moreover, so, thus, at least, for example, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1048951049 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73817080251 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646853146853 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1757164056 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.285714286 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247874741757 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783037413075 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546569896666 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146883506793 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526059759969 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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