Is freedom pf speech necessary in free society? To what extend do you agree or disagree?
One of the most controversial issue today relates to free speech whether it is most essential or not. In the essay,I am going to examine this question from both points of view before giving my own opinion
One side of arguement is hold by people who argue that the benefits of free speech. Considerably outweight its drawbacks. The main reason for believing that if people are allowed to express their views then they feel free and safe in society. to be more clear,there are many kinds of rights in my country,but people speak freely is crucial right. Mankind have right to speak in democratic society. It is also possible to say that it gives people courage to speak freely. When falks put their views in front of society and community members implement their views then humans feel not only good but also feel proud. Human beings can easily speak about their own problems.
On the other hand,it is also possible to make opposing case. It is pften argued that some laws are confidential which relate to security of nation. To illustrate it, If government share their views with local individuals and community,then many mankind can leak these kind of information. but people are allowed to speak free in laws such as,health,voting,and education.As a result, When people have no right to speak these laws then they can create riots and protest.
To sum up,As we have seen,there are no easy answers to this question on balance,However,I tend to beleive that lawmakers should update and inform people when they make any laws of their behalf
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, kind of, such as, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8897338403 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72057948215 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589353612167 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0650345648 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8571428571 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0516435481461 0.244688304435 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0172976184662 0.084324248473 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0266687866259 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0313657235055 0.151304729494 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238211993679 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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