It is undeniable that water scarcity is becoming a worldwide problem. Although there will undoubtedly be some negative consequences of this trend, solutions can be taken to mitigate these potential problems.
There are a number of problems related to this trend. The main issue is the increasing population. In fact, an increase in population growth leads to urbanization. Since the beginning of this process, freshwater has been used excessively. Besides, growth in demand for daily needs appears due to a rise in population. This would mean that much freshwater would need to be allocated to daily needs for people. Another problem is that more industrial nations appear. Several countries have exploited natural resources and ignored the damage caused to the ecosystem. For instance, companies constructed in sea or lakes have polluted the water and environment of this place. Therefore, water scarcity has risen and is now a global problem.
However, there are several actions that could be taken to solve problems mentioned above. Firstly, it is important for the government to enforce regulations to combat these problems. If the government imposes heavy fines, people will pay more attention to protect water and the environment. Secondly, I think one way is to produce fresh water from the sea. This is currently an unrealistic option, but this could be a calculated solution in the future with the unity of many countries. Finally, the wiser solution is using less water. Instead of trying more expensive ways of getting water to people, we should manage it properly such as planning drought-resistant trees and plants or collecting used water to water plants, flush the toilet or soak dishes.
In conclusion, various measures can be implemented to tackle the problems that are certain to arise such as the scarcity of freshwater.
- Some people say that all young people should be required to stay in full time education until they are at least 18 years old To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- Fresh water becomes a global problem for the world What are the causes of it What measures government and individual should take to resolve to the problem Give reason for your answer 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25423728814 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88642823728 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593220338983 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.4540171058 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.75 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.95 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21011166993 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637654874706 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521687658684 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11734813618 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326880501078 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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