Full time students should take a lot of time to study, but it is also essential to be involved in other activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Normally, students taking full-time education at school spend a large proportion of time on academic work; nevertheless, there is absolute necessity in engaging them in extracurricular activities between classes.
Participation in these activities outside the classroom can prevent students from falling into the sphere of normal curriculum and instructional methods all the time. Schooling without temporary breaks from school work is too stressful and students may feel exhausted too soon to be concentrated in the classroom. In other words, students can be reset to focus on the class after a diversion into non-academic fields.
Proper participation also helps with students' healthy development as game playing, artistic events and other activities emphasize positive and supportive relationships with peers and provide a social-friendly environment. Getting involved in group activities, namely basketball playing, highlights teamwork spirit and cooperation. It is thus well recognized that such team-centred activities enable students to establish social ties and communication links with peers. They also educate students about embracing diversity in cultures and genders and avoiding risky behaviors like drinking or drug abuse.
These activities also build up a better profile, as they add value and knowledge to their repertoire and hence make them distinguishing. An experience of drawing or combating on a school basketball team shapes leadership and team-spirit into young minds and may carry into adulthood developing into a profession as an artist or professional player.
In conclusion, students should be encouraged to jump out of the academic box by enjoying a richer campus life, interacting with peers and developing artistic or athletic interests so as to be a well-round talent.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 182, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...eloping artisitic or athletic interests so as to be a well-round talent.
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, nevertheless, so, thus, well, as to, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1247.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 209.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.96650717703 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24831404726 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.703349282297 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2114021224 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.555555556 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2222222222 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236311277048 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858792814067 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492833066927 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135022194903 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450392000037 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.64 12.4159519038 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.67 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 182, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...eloping artisitic or athletic interests so as to be a well-round talent.
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, nevertheless, so, thus, well, as to, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1247.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 209.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.96650717703 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24831404726 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.703349282297 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2114021224 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.555555556 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2222222222 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236311277048 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858792814067 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492833066927 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135022194903 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450392000037 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.64 12.4159519038 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.67 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.