Full time university students spend a lot of time studying however they should perform other activities too To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Full-time university students spend a lot of time studying, however they should perform
other activities too. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

When asked about factors contributing to successful education, some believe that
academic performance is a key, but Others argue that undergraduates should attend extra
activities to improve their school life. In my opinion, I am in favour of joining other
pastimes on campus.
To start with, there is common belief that students can have access to social interaction
from outdoor activities. It is a worthwhile chance for university students to be
accompanied by school friends to cultivate and develop necessary skills like
communication, eloquence, and cooperation. For example, some students are interested in
dancing groups which are an efficient environment for them to experience ways of
cooperation and interaction with other dancers.
Furthermore, many people hold the view that extracurricular activities can ease tension
for students. The majority of undergraduates are overwhelmed with reading lists, mini-
tests and exams, oral presentations, and written assignments. It comes as no surprise that
a growing number of them run the risks of depression, anxiety, and nervousness. It is
highly recommended that students should spend time taking part in several pastimes like
rock climbing, or baseball, school clubs in order to refresh their mind and improve
performance.
On the other hand, some people hold the opinion that it is good to spend much time
learning. Some students suppose that they are preoccupied with many types of
assignments and tight deadlines, so there isn’t enough time to attend other activities. No one can deny this idea, but full-time education is blamed for some serious mental problems. They should balance time for study and entertainment to maximize their school
performance.
In conclusion, students should spend more time attending recreational activities instead of
focusing excessively on school work.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, to start with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71886120996 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10616431219 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612099644128 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3151441989 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.785714286 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0714285714 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.38176352705 456% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255434257446 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857556762315 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652096815944 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.065644058814 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780232914121 0.056905535591 137% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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