Some people believe that it’s not necessary to have internet access to live a full life. What is your opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own experience.
Recently, the problem of the internet has been brought to public attention. Some believe that online network is not critical to the life. Personally, I completely against the idea of the elimination of the internet for several reasons.
To start with, there is a common belief that the internet is a useful media for the majority of worldwide residents to update the newest information. To illustrate, most inhabitants take advantage of online network to look for the detailed information such as news and weather forecast of local provinces or even overseas countries at finger tips through smartphone and laptop. While newspapers publish the main news about local security, economics and the government once a day, the internet can update many kinds of news in the world at any time.
Furthermore, people hold the view that online network is an educational form. There are a variety of platforms with the large amount of general knowledge on the internet like Wikipedia, e-dictionaries, e-lectures, and e-book libraries. Thus, students can cultivate knowledge, refer to the ideas as well as doing research material loans. Also, thanks to online applications such as Zoom and Gmail, students can take part in online classes instead of studying at the University.
On the other hand, some people hold the opinion that the internet becomes concerned about improper distraction in students. It comes as no surprise that there are a wide source of recreational forms like video games, movies, and music which make children and teenagers glue their eyes to screen along with impairing concentration during school time. No one can deny this idea, but students can take advantage of e-lectures to make progress on self-study.
Considering all of the factors above, there are positive sides of Internet if people do not abuse the utilization of Internet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, so, thus, well, while, such as, as well as, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22147651007 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82930287028 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607382550336 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6580141301 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.142857143 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101993890136 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0415759700361 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420025368593 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0659716151071 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369161994346 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.