the future all the cars buses will be driverless The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers Do you think the advantage of drivless vehicles out weigh the disadvantages 790293 | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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the future all the cars buses will be driverless The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers Do you think the advantage of drivless vehicles out weigh the disadvantages (790293)

In today's modern era, Technology has wondrously influenced every sphere of life .A dramatic change is noticed in transportation and there is possibility that we would be blessed with highly automated vehicles in future . This Trend would have countless advantages along with a handful of disadvantages. This essay will explain the merits along with few demerits in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, the first and foremost benefit of driverless vehicles is to be less economic .To be precise, government would not have any need to hire drivers that would save huge amount of tax collected money of people which could be used to provide better education and basic health facilities to its citizens.Moreover ,there would also be less possibility of accidents which occurs frequently due to negligence of drivers .To exemplify ,60% of road accidents in India happens due to drunkard drivers and over speed is also responsible for 20% accident on roads .Thus, the automatic vehicles would play a major role for the safety of passengers .
On the other hand , the driverless cars ,buses would have some drawbacks also. These vehicles would be totally technolog based .Hence, if they would not be updated frequently,then people of newly located areas would have to face difficulty. furthermore ,this trend will also increase crimes in society which would also be the direct result of unemployment .To illustrate,employed drivers would loss their jobs due to self drive vehicles that would bring chaos in society as unemployed drivers would indulge themselves in anti social activities to earn their livelihood.Thus,unemployment would bring drastic changes in the lives of drivers .

To conclude ,although driverless vehicles has few disadvantages yet its advantages can not be ignored as they are related with safety as well as proper utilisation of people hard earned money.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, then, thus, well, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34121621622 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21519137153 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597972972973 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 185.703224258 49.4020404114 376% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 197.625 106.682146367 185% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.0 20.7667163134 178% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.125 7.06120827912 200% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20629410146 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101117160763 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473091242085 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138314758069 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242115198165 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.2 13.0946893788 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.46 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, then, thus, well, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand

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