In the future all cars, trucks and buses will be driverless, the only people traveling inside these vehicles will be passengers.
It has already been foreseeable that many types of transports will be driverless in the future. This could be reached by utilizing new means of manufacturing and technologies. Although, this may seem as a positive development for some, from my point of view, countries would face increasing unemployment rates brought by this phenomenon.
On the one hand, there seem to be 2 main benefits of driverless cars. The first one is that a noticeable decline in the number of road accidents which could be reached easily. Those vehicles will be naturally programmed to conform to the all rules. In fact, the majority of the road accidents is occured as a result of over speeding irrespective of the existing laws. Hence, self-driving cars would be a possible solition to this issue. Secondly, driverless cars can be controlled through a particular distance. To illustrate, many city centers have the problem of insufficient parking spaces which can be sorted out by those vehicles. People may change their cars' location whenever they want.
On the other hand, a number of demerits of those cars should not be oberlooked. For instance, difficult controlling system, over consumption of fuels, and impact on the unemployment rates. As long as we find out more about these issues, there may be a devastative consequences, like insufficient job opportunities. When the self-driving transports are widely available, countries may struggle with increasing unemployment rates since many people earn money as a driver.
Manufacturing driverless vehicles, to conclude, may begin a new era of transportation which may happen in the forthcoming future. In my mind, however, the advantages of this development are negligible when compared to its drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 151, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Line 6, column 266, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'consequence'?
Suggestion: consequence
...hese issues, there may be a devastative consequences, like insufficient job opportunities. W...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, for instance, in fact, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33096085409 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18525417367 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583629893238 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3805216416 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.2222222222 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6111111111 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27777777778 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252901797842 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779321096915 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794010063318 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108779348087 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0994775831869 0.056905535591 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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