In the future, it seems it will be more difficult to live on the Earth. Some people think more money should be spent on researching other planets to live, such as Mars. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Most people think in future it seem to be difficult to live on earth, some think the government should spend more money on researching other planets like mars. while I agree that finding the new place to stay is a good solution, I believe that there is another way which is cheaper to solve than that solution.
On the one hand, earth is seriously damaged, I agree that moving to other planets like mars is one of the solution. Many experts said that mars had the same structure like earth and it had life there. if one day there was no way to live in earth, people would move to other planet. At that time, if we did not prepare a new place, there might be a mess.
On the other hand, there is another way more cheaper and easier to solve that problem, which is save environment. Firstly, the government should improve people’s awareness about the environment. The more people pay attention, the more green environment will be. Secondly, reduce pollutants from factories and households life, also lower the emission from transport, factories,.. Lastly, encourage people using economically friendly products.
In conclusion, while people researching for the new life in other planet , I do not think run away from the mess be done is a good idea.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1048.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 218.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80733944954 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5958412143 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559633027523 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8672376169 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3333333333 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.91666666667 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356668191146 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123914807238 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138477104687 0.0667982634062 207% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217024532526 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0846832573068 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.