In the future, it seems more difficult to live on the Earth. Some people think more
money should be spent on researching other planet to live, such as Mars. To what
extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In recent years, the question of whether human should give high priority for researching extraterrestrial life or not has been receiving a great deal of public attention. Although these projects appear attractive, the downsides will be far more significant.
There are a variety of reasons why the earth is becoming inhospitable. first, since the over-consumption of human race results in depletion of natural resources, human life is more and more unsustainable. In fact, non-renewable resources like fossil fuels, groundwater, earth minerals are going to reach the peaks and eventually running out, which cannot adequately supply for growing energy demands. second, by causing plenty of contamination, environmental quality is degrading. this means that everyday people are suffered from a large number of exhaust fumes from vehicles, carbon emission from factories and thousands of tons of industrial rubbish, which definitely has negative impacts on human health.
Nevertheless, it is not necessary to expend money on researching the earth-like planets. first, in order to conduct these space programs, government funds seem to spend a tremendous amount of money. For example, to launch the projects, a team needs a number of qualified researchers, professional experts as well as many modern types of equipment like supercomputers, telescopes and satellites, which leads to budget deficits as an unexpected result. second, if this amount of money could be used for investing modern technology, discovering a new planet is not considered as a high priority. In fact, eco-friendly alternatives, electric vehicles and renewable resources have been widely using and achieving positive results all around the world, which implies that living sustainably on the earth is more straightforward.
In conclusion, the downsides of colonising new planets are more severe. By considering all aspects, people could make a rational decision now and down the road.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 18, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
In recent years, the question of whether human should give high priority for res...
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Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: First
...why the earth is becoming inhospitable. first, since the over-consumption of human ra...
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Line 3, column 402, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Second
...tely supply for growing energy demands. second, by causing plenty of contamination, en...
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Line 3, column 482, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...on, environmental quality is degrading. this means that everyday people are suffered...
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Line 3, column 532, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... that everyday people are suffered from a large number of exhaust fumes from vehicles, carbon emi...
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Line 5, column 90, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: First
... on researching the earth-like planets. first, in order to conduct these space progra...
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Line 5, column 452, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Second
...udget deficits as an unexpected result. second, if this amount of money could be used ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, nevertheless, second, so, well, for example, in conclusion, in fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66101694915 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24060350244 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647457627119 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3442140091 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.285714286 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136463720341 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.043389229806 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0262058992489 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0767639087015 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.014748508161 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.