The use of mobile phone is as antisocial as smoking. Smoking is banned at certain places so mobile phone should be banned as smoking. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, the question of whether cell phone usage should be banned as smoking or not has been receiving a great deal of public attention. Although using phone has disadvantageous, this argument is groundless.
there are a variety of reasons why this policy should not be implemented. first, since mobile phone and cigarettes are two distinct products, any comparisons are implausible. In fact, tobacco products contain hazardous chemical compounds which are detrimental to human’s health, while phone has nothing to do with these chemicals. second, by using mobile phone in society, this can positively promote social behaviours between person and person.this means that mobile users can keep in touch, even living in long distances, thus strengthen social interactions.
Moreover, there are a whole host of reasons to not ban mobile phone. first, since using mobile phone is one of the most efficient and inexpensive ways to communicate with others.
In fact, before the appearance of cell phone, delivering a message from one location to another would require physical travels, costing a tremendous amount of money, time and afford. second, by using phone, people can take control of emergency situations. For example, when road traffic incidents, outdoor accidents, and injuries especially occurring at rural areas, the use of mobile phone has the advantage of immediately responding or accessing, which implies that mobile phones can save lives in emergencies.
In conclusion, the policy of banning mobile phone like tobacco products due to their antisocial effects is unreasonable. By considering the advantages of phone usage, people could make a rational decision to consider banning.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: whether; the question whether
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... this policy should not be implemented. first, since mobile phone and cigarettes are ...
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...has nothing to do with these chemicals. second, by using mobile phone in society, this...
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... thus strengthen social interactions. Moreover, there are a whole host of reas...
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...tions. Moreover, there are a whole host of reasons to not ban mobile phone. fir...
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...ndous amount of money, time and afford. second, by using phone, people can take contro...
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...phones can save lives in emergencies. In conclusion, the policy of banning mob...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, moreover, second, so, then, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5534351145 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91841006386 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637404580153 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.27750404 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.923076923 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353879128085 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129075437402 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636598266702 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206172305065 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284679146668 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.