Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, global warming has been receiving a great deal of public attention due to its harmful effects. Although living with this harsh climate appears attractive, the disadvantages will be far more significant.
There are a variety of reasons why people think co-existing with climate change is a good idea. first, since the progress of climate change is inevitable, it seems totally futile for resistance. For example, Japan has been hitting by several earthquakes or Southeast Asia Nations have been striking by severe storms each year, which changes geographic structures as well as the figure of the Earth. second, technology allows us to have an easy way to live with climate change. In fact, plenty of innovation has been applying to reduce people impacts on the environment like electric vehicles for transporting or Alternative nutrition sources for sustainable healthy diets, which emphasizes how technology is counteracting global warming.
However, it is compulsory for human acts against natural disasters due to a number of reasons. first, climate change is most commonly attributed to human activities like burning fossil fuels, releasing huge amounts of gas emission from vehicles and factories. If the human race does not take responsibility for what they have been doing for nature, the results are big losses. this means that climate change is largely shaped by humans such as carbon emission, deforestation, which caused climate change and frequent storms. second, over a long period of time, natural disasters will negatively affect biodiversity including the destruction of habitats, elimination of a variety of species, which directly has major impacts on human life.
In conclusion, the disadvantages of co-existing with global warming will be far more severe. By considering all the reasons why concentrating on preventing climate change, people would make a rational decision now and down the road.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, well, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90727057946 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6916327633 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.428571429 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157870126003 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592725713447 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588197867657 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0978323153598 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288401203117 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.