in the future, the main reason for going to the shopping mall will be for entertainment, not to shop. DO you agree or disagree?
It is true that for some people, spending time in a shopping mall is not only for shopping but also for relaxation. While agreeing that this trend is gaining more and more popularity, I believe that entertainment is not the primary reason for going to the mall.
It cannot be denied that shopping malls which offer people a variety of services can attract more customers to come because shopping has become a kind of pleasure; it is no longer a household task as before. People today are not likely to shop alone. Instead, they do shopping with their family or friends, usually on weekends. This is also a chance for them to be together in a restaurant or in a cinema after buying something for a whole week. This is the reason why we usually see more people in entertainment and restaurant areas than in shopping sections.
However, I argue against the idea that people will choose shopping malls for entertainment instead of for shopping. In fact, there are many amazing amusement parks which offer them a much more variety of entertainment forms. Therefore, if someone’s need is to seek something to entertain them, they simply choose an entertainment center. It is just like the case that if I want to learn French and English, to save time for traveling, I will choose a school which can offer me both courses but if I just want to learn English, then I will choose a school which specializes in English teaching. All forms of entertainment in a shopping mall can only be used as a supplementary to the main service of a shopping mall to bring more convenience to its customers. Entertainment can never replace the main function of a shopping mall, a place for people to shop.
In sum, shopping malls will continue to expand their areas for entertainment activities to draw more customers, but customers will never go to a shopping mall just for entertainment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 59, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to shop'.
Suggestion: to shop
...gainst the idea that people will choose shopping malls for entertainment instead of for ...
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Line 5, column 304, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o seek something to entertain them, they simply choose an entertainment center. I...
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Line 5, column 650, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of entertainment in a shopping mall can only be used as a supplementary to the m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, therefore, while, as for, in fact, kind of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79141104294 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8673352878 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48773006135 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6900834879 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.571428571 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.454998469734 0.244688304435 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180395893915 0.084324248473 214% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12311287846 0.0667982634062 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.334434519274 0.151304729494 221% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641520865801 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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