Nowadays people tend to go to shopping malls for entertainment and relaxation rather than for shopping. Many people do their shopping online. Therefore, I believe that entertainment has become the essential reason for going to shopping mall.
Nowadays people visit shopping malls looking for leisure and entertainment opportunities that go well beyond traditional shopping. Gone those days where shopping malls are characterized with wide selection of large stores although variety of stores is vital criterion in terms of shopping however, online shopping provides customers with ultimate level of convenience. Malls will never be able to compete with the endless variety of products selections and always on nature of online. Therefore Shopping malls operators are differentiating people according to their interests and age groups to attract different categories of people to spend their leisure time in malls. That is why most malls include much more than cinemas or sport clubs, for instance Dubai Emirates mall includes exhibition hall, theater, museum, aquarium and bibliotheca to attract people with cultural concerns.
Shopping malls offer many entertainment facilities and amenities. For instance the west mall in Canada provide year round surfing and beach volleyball on indoor beach furthermore, water park that features an internal ponds with sea lions. This way, several cinemas, ice arenas, restaurants that offer divergent types of cuisines to satisfy all tastes, theme parks, bowling alleys, kids' areas so that infants can enjoy their hobbies and spend entertaining time with their parents, health clubs and gyms are all included in shopping malls to make combining different errands more comfortable.
Sustainability and storm of global trends like online shopping are forcing shopping malls operators to change the role shopping malls play in people's life concerning entertainment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, look, so, therefore, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.7323943662 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81187050748 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619718309859 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.9676003065 49.4020404114 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.666666667 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360717991307 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162673278211 0.084324248473 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0903334988916 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254507218391 0.151304729494 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101975937064 0.056905535591 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.25 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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