Nowadays, shopping malls are considered places not only for shopping, but also for other purposes such as entertainment and that got some people to ask whether the main reason to go to shopping malls is pleasure or shopping?. I strongly believe that people go to shopping malls primarily for other activities not for shopping. In this essay I will be discussing my view in details.
As a matter of fact , no one can deny that people enjoy spending time at shopping malls because they offer great means of entertainment. Most shopping malls have food courts, cinemas and arcades, which attract a lot of people and distract them from shopping. Also, I would like to add that shopping malls are great places to host concertstherefore; people who are music lovers would prefer spending more time attending these events instead of shopping.
In addition, it is worth mentioning that people like taking portraits and photos at shopping malls.Some shopping malls are equipped with fancy decorations and provide attractive outdoor areas, which encourage people to capture more photos and spend more time together away from shopping. Let us not forget the fact that fashion shows taking place at shopping malls play a vital role in getting attention from fashion lovers, as a result, people spending more time in taking photos not in shopping.
Last but not least , people go to shopping malls for many purposes not only shopping but I really think the main reason to go to shopping malls is entertainment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, really, so, therefore, in addition, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05220883534 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68574362846 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534136546185 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.2856450121 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.777777778 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6666666667 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.77777777778 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370012905368 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.191884539252 0.084324248473 228% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151093821617 0.0667982634062 226% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.291474108042 0.151304729494 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.174271303199 0.056905535591 306% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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