It could be argued that morals from previous era like honour and honesty are not important in people's life now. And
Essential thing is what the people own. I strongly agree with this opinion and I will discuss my view in this essay.
The global trend shifts towards the consumerism and materialistic therefore, People begin to judge each other according to their possessions and how they live. According to a recent survey made by USA education dept that 80% of teenagers judge their schoolmates according to the mobile phone brand they own. Therefore this research shows that the most vital things in people's life is their materials belongings. Furthermore celebrities who become role models to many young people, hence they try to imitate their luxurious life style .
finally, Internet nowadays has taken over social life. people spend most of their time taking selfies and showing their lavish life styles on social media websites such as Instagram or Facebook. For instance, a recent survey made by UN that 85% from millennial post selfies everyday on different social media websites, further more their social value is judged according to the number of likes they get. Furthermore celebrities who become role models to many young people showing their fancy cars and villas on social media website s, hence they try to imitate their luxurious life style.
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In conclusion as the world shifts toward materialistic possessions and this trend has not been curbed. The morals will be out-of-date and the most vital thing in people's life is their social status.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1323.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16796875 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49536858422 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5703125 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1519230369 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.769230769 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118422682254 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052235704624 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328789785253 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.079581211054 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316247196897 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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