It is undoubtedly true that, after present time nobody will purchase printed Newspaper or books because they will be able to read anything they want online without paying. I think, after development modern world people can find and read in online and if will be unpaid system but it has benefits and drawback both side.
On the one hand, people can read magazines and e-books from online and they can know many unknown things from online such as they know all world news in their smart device. Moreover, people do not have to pay for online news of searching anykind of news like, people know other countries all news through this websites. Furthermore, now modern world will be producing business people and they creating online news channel and they earn their money from that platforms views, likes and ratings. Along with, students can study in online and they find their study related all things in e-books which user does not have to pay for this. Besides, over the period people Will make all types of presentation over the online and when they want to editing in their all types of presentation that time they can correct their assignment or anything else. For example, e-books, newspapers where People see in online there will have not ang kind of wrong spelling and they will able to read easily.
On the other hand, printed books and newspaper can give people practical experience which they read properly any distrubence. For instance, if people read magazines in online or e-books that time their intention go other website which can be distracted their study but print books and newspaper does not do this. Additionally, if people does not buy printed newspaper and books it will be hampered on business person who is continuing this business. Along with printed magazines is a traditional what exists from a country and it build a connection with people and newspaper. Moreover, if tge student concentrate smart online media that time they most of the time uses their smart device and they do not go outside for play. Besides, online do not take monet from e-books users but peole have to pay for this, who provide that online connection.
To conclude, in future people will not buy printed newspaper and books because they can get easily to read everything what they want trough online and it unpaid but it will be creat a bad effect over the business man and also students but after modernization people can do anything over the internet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, i think, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 28.0 10.4138276553 269% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2044.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 421.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85510688836 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35775470044 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.425178147268 0.561755894193 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 621.0 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.2596379962 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.266666667 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0666666667 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.460731728871 0.244688304435 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.189855646842 0.084324248473 225% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0978234059559 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.346203540304 0.151304729494 229% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488949996096 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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