In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement
Nowadays. reading books is more and more increasingly focused and people have different ways to take up this hobby. To a certain extent, I agree that in the future, people will elevate to read free everything on the tablet, smartphone. However, I also think that the printed books will never disappear.
On the one hand, in the future, people enjoy reading information online due to its utilities, especially, they do not have to pay any fee. By contrast to the book, with a smartphone, they can read at any place they want, any time when they are off duty. For example, a paying public, who is quite busy with work, can read news on the Internet while he is on trains. Sometimes, the volume of the books is substantial, so it is too inconvenient for the adults to bring it along, while the smartphone is light and always alongside. Moreover, many researchers show that people can be sparing 30% of expenses annually on average if they read e-news.
Nevertheless, I also think that the printed newspapers or books will still be favored by many people such as the old. It is due to that they are not fancied using tablets or smartphones, it causes inconvenience and exasperation. Reading information online a lot can lead to many health problems. As a case in point, according to many studies conducted by Yale University, a typical person while uses a computer or tablet too much, the risk of issues of the eye will be much higher than people not use these devices. Furthermore, the information on the Internet is not always precise because it does not have as careful investigations and checks as traditional books, like the covid 19 news. It makes users misleading if not search thoughtfully. In addition, when the young come to the promote areas, there are many difficulties to access the Internet in order to approach the latest news.
To sum up, while I believe that reading everything online without paying is motivated by its utilities, I do not think that the traditional books or newspapers will be obsolescent.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Reading
Nowadays. reading books is more and more increasingly foc...
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Line 3, column 781, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ly. In addition, when the young come to the promote areas, there are many difficulties to a...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, while, for example, in addition, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78285714286 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82478245505 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528571428571 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8719022205 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.625 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328567085788 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101027927724 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799381097168 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211941976366 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551370283693 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Reading
Nowadays. reading books is more and more increasingly foc...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 781, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ly. In addition, when the young come to the promote areas, there are many difficulties to a...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, while, for example, in addition, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78285714286 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82478245505 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528571428571 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8719022205 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.625 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328567085788 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101027927724 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799381097168 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211941976366 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551370283693 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.