In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want without paying.
To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement.
In recent years the trend has been towards news technology which create impact on newspapers. In coming years the paper based news will not relavent to society, because with internet and mobile are able show all kind of information. I totally agree with this statement that future will based online news and books, in the course of the essay, I will describe arguments.
Fristly, mobile give access to everybody to watch and read news and information on screen by connecting with internet. With paper based virsion of data need a specific place to get it and read, instead of this the phone gives control to individuals that they can access any time. The newspaper take significant to deliver information to person because it take time to write and design it, after enormous number set of newspaper to print it. Overall it take more then half day, in this time news will lose their impact, while, with online system takes few minutes to complete this process.
Secondly, to store this information take a considerable place to put these books and newspaper, on the other side it does not take place to preserve it and do not have any kind of danger of weather impact, which destroy the paper. In addition, online news provide easy to access of old news or data. Paper based news need paper to print on it, which made by wood. Number of trees are cut down to produce paper which cause pollution, because trees help to reduce pollution and if we cut it then the production of clean air go down. However, for online newspaper the do pay money for paper and printing.
In conclusion, the books and other means of transfore the information will shift on internet which gives chance to every body access that information.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, in addition, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72666666667 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40567846748 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8674447207 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.076923077 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204931555319 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739132999826 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617069734221 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124415100778 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538931648542 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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