In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without payment.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
As the development of the technology has been thriving to the next level; populations of book readers experienced a drastic drop nowadays. The reason behind this is because they can operate electronic devices instead to access almost every article on the Internet without a penny. In my opinion, I tend to agree that readers of physical books would decrease steadily henceforth; however, we have to pay to read these e-articles and e-books.
To begin with, electronic devices are rather cost-effective than printed materials. Although the price of a single electronic gadget isn't cheap, it is still worth purchasing anyway as its conveniences. People just need to carry a phone and then they can access any materials wherever they want. Instead of books, they are heavy and only a few volumes of them can be brought when going mobile. Moreover, the cost of technological devices tend to be more affordable and advanced which give people more accessibility. Hence, in future, drawbacks of non-digital materials will be exposed.
On the other hand, the author's benefit has to be ensured. These creators have to receive an adequate amount of funds to contribute their efforts continuously. In order to achieve this, readers despite either physical readers or e-book readers have to pay to make the creation sustainable. For instance, Audible.com is an online platform which provides audible books, a certain amount of subscription fees have to be committed in order to utilize its features such as studying vast amounts of e-books. These funds not only would be used for maintaining the website itself but also wages for creators.
In conclusion, the publication of newspapers and books will face a considerable shrink in the foreseeable future as its disadvantages will be overwhelmed by its competitors. Whilst the populace has to burden the salary to authors.
- In comtemporary society everyone should have equal opportunities in education Therefore universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- People across the world are more similar than they are different To what extent do you agree or disagree 67
- The planet s population is reaching unsustainable levels and people are facing shortage of resource like water food and fuel To what consequences may overpopulation lead In your opinion what measures can be taken to fight overpopulation 61
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, hence, however, moreover, so, still, then, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23666666667 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94854201259 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616666666667 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3135400777 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1875 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210041511786 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575044009671 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512491617715 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121740643984 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418734443673 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.