Genetics engineering is a dangerous trend, it should be limited. To what extent do you agree.?
Nowadays the genetic engineering and advances in the field of genetics, play important role in humans life is an undeniable fact. Should we realise that important of genetic engineering in humans knowledge we will ponder over how to use this science in our life much more scrupulously.
advantages and disadvantages of this knowledge have recently been the topic of debating among researchers. Infact most of scintists believe that this knowledge can help people in defferent fields on the contrary side there are some people and missionaries that they believe that via this knowledge human try to manipulate in the nature of creation.
I do believe that this knowledge has more advantages than its few negative aspects in humans life and these are my justification. To begin with I can point out the progresses of this knowledge in agriculture. For example genetically modified crops today is one of significant achievements in recent century for human. The second reason why advocate this point of view lies in the fact that genetic engineering has led to crucial achievement in human health that we cannot ignore them. Last but not least some researchers have claimed that this science has many positive influences in nature. For instance one of these impact is ; “ risks to the local water supply are reduced”
having discussed the issue that point of view I would rather look at it from another perspective as well despite the human achievements vis genetic engineering this knowledge can have some negative aspects. one of these negative effects is in genetically modiefied crops . some people believe that this crops have less nutritional value than organic products.
By havin all above mentioned arguments into consideration the following conclusion can be drawn about the issue underestimating the value of genetic engineering in our life is not logical. Although it may be has some negative aspects
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...engineering in our life is not logical. Although it may be has some negative aspects
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, second, so, well, for example, for instance, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27184466019 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91903687084 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553398058252 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.6839850032 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.357142857 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0714285714 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108151499882 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434520334545 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375608244037 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0719060381966 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454793425008 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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