Today, the high sales of popular consumer reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
if i want to define advertising, i can say it is a way of communication to encourage an audience for making purchase decision about a product or service and conveying information to viewers. nowadays advertising plays important role in marketing that is an undeniable fact. Should producers and sellers realize the advantages of advertising in their products selling. they will ponder over the power of ads in selling their products much more scrupulously. The impact of advertising on trading and commercial has recently been the topic of debate among researchers.
some people believe that advertising has significant influence in consumption of a product and others say; people mostly buy what they need and don't attention to advertisements. do people really pay attention to advertising when they want to buy something? In my opinion to answer to this question we need more study on people's consumption behaviours.
I do believe that most of the people’s can affect easily from ads in their purchases, and these are my justifications; to begin with, nowadays most of visuals advertisements in internet, newspaper, tv and so on are attraction enough and encourage consumers for making purchase decision (even if they don’t need that product). I think the cause is that, they (advertising companies) use several methods to make ads attractive. For example they use celebrities in their advertisements, so if the consumer doesn't need that product, at least (he or she)'ll be convinced to try it once.
The second reason why I advocate this point of view lies in the fact that when we see the pictures of a product over and over during days, Unconsciously that is bear in our mind that product has more merits rather than other brands, so when it comes to buying we prefer to buy the one that we've seen more in advertisements. (in the other word; ads impel in our subconscious mind that product has more advantages rather than other brands). Further more, there is a viewpoint among majority of the peoples, that they think, the products which being advertised, have more qualities rather than others.
having discuss the issue that point of view, I would rather to look at it from an other perspective as well despite the impact of ads in consuming of products because of bad economic conditions in some countries, people’s in that countries mostly don’t pay attention to ads and they buy what they really need. For instance there is a study about the habits of consuming people’s in afghanistan that it’s conclusion comes in statistics that demonstrate the people who lives in this country usually buy their priorities and don’t pay attention to advertisments.
By having all above mentioned arguments into consideration, the following conclusion can be drawn about the issue underestimating the effect of advertisement in consumption of things is not logical. Attending to this issue meticulously contribute to realize consumers behaviour in terms of consumption and can improve several aspects of trading and helps to prevent the waste of primary materials.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 7.30460921844 287% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 54.0 24.0651302605 224% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 82.0 41.998997996 195% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2612.0 1615.20841683 162% => OK
No of words: 501.0 315.596192385 159% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21357285429 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73107062784 4.20363070211 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1117463596 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 176.041082164 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491017964072 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 797.4 506.74238477 157% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.2428810249 49.4020404114 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.111111111 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8333333333 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38888888889 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131684331294 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503347184376 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361280003084 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0745872243099 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409098016689 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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