Give your opinion about a success of a team. Does it depend on mental attitude of the whole team or the strongest individual? Give your opinion with examples.
Indubitably,in the contemporary era every task ranging from academic to sports involves team work. However, it is often argued that wether mental attitude of whole group or single strong member leads to success.In my profound conceit group efforts are the most significant.
Apparently,mental attitude of whole group is of extreme relevance and which can be substantiated by many supporting arguments and examples.It is an undeniable fact that sticks in the bundle are unbreakable. Even though the team is composed of hard competitors,it will not achieve anything if those strong sticks are not bundled by coordination and one common objective. For instance;Despite Ronaldo is the leading footballer, Messi's Argentina always wins the match due to an remarkable association.
Not only cooperation is a key contributing factor but also the mental harmony and goal oriented attitude is of equal priority. As stated by F.W Taylor in his scientific principles of goal accomplishment, "Mental Revolution" is of paramount significance. This principle explains that there should be well established peace and harmony among group members and instead of race of personal dominance all efforts should be directed towards one common goal. To vindicate, instead of fighting to become the Man of Match, our honourable captain,"Virat Kolhi" plays for the team and thus India rocks.
To recapitulate, even the weakest drop of water becomes the strongest ocean to dive the world when united. It is quiet obvious that string of pearls than a single gem is a stair to soaring heights. I feel nations and organisations should put striving efforts on polishing the teams as a whole rather than spending huge pockets on raising one. This is the secret of developed nations which makes it way stand out from others.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41403508772 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26432727585 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652631578947 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7830931791 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.692307692 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108061765743 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.034214041732 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0304546186345 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0644575539341 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246714028533 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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