Global warming is one of the biggest threats human face in the 21st century and sea levels are continuing to rise at alarming rate what problems are associated with this and what are some possible solution
It is an incontrovertible fact that the global warming has become a major concern all over the world. The given topic asserts that due to this the ocean levels are increasing dramatically. This essay examines the possible reasons for this phenomenon and suggest some of the practical measures to curb this issue.
To embark with, there are plethora of problems which happening because of global warming. The first is that today's temperature are rising day by day because of pollution which affecting the glaciers. The ice caps are melting and the coastal areas are flooding due to it the people are becoming homeless and lost their life. For example, during 2011 Tsunami in Japan, in which million of people displayed. As well as the animal species are extinction those are living in ice caps such as Polar Bear and others.
There is almost certainly no one solution to this problem often given the complexity of its causes. However one option has to be to control this problem is the flood defences such as dams and floodgates could be built along costs and waterways, by this way stopping the water reaching in areas. Moreover government should start some rules to curb the pollution. To Instant, they should ban the use of plastic things and make compulsory travelling by public vehicles as private vehicles. Because the pollution is one of the major reason of global warming.
In conclusion, I pen down to say that the government and people should go hand in hand to sort out this obstacle which make one of the foremost challenge for all the nations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...reasons for this phenomenon and suggest some of the practical measures to curb this issue. ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
...se of global warming. The first is that todays temperature are rising day by day becau...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...y stopping the water reaching in areas. Moreover government should start some rules to c...
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...by public vehicles as private vehicles. Because the pollution is one of the major reas...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ic vehicles as private vehicles. Because the pollution is one of the major reason...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, so, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88389513109 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54400042594 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569288389513 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3977400409 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1428571429 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170080102834 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545357185429 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450839222621 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0946933463367 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501333745736 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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