Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what solutions can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge
Due to the development of industrial era, many sectors of the world become increasingly warmer, which leads to a number of reasons behind the global warming. Therefore, the government and the individuals should take steps the mitigate these potential problems.
There are two primary reasons why the world is threatened by the climate change. One reason is that mainly human-caused disturbance such as burning fossil fuels damages the ozone layers because of emitting carbon dioxide into the atmosphere. Particularly, the exploitation energy from the power plants releases thousands of tones of toxic gas in the inhabitants. Another reason is that emissions of burning of gasoline for transportation including cars, bus or airplanes are also devasting the environment. Take Vietnamese consumption of petroleum as an example, total domestic gasoline consumption in the whole country is approximately 5 million cubic meters every year.
Neverthelesss, there are potential measures to address these problems. Firstly, the government needs to build more solar, wind and water plants to reduce the dependence on using fossil fuels. Consequently, carbon dioxide from the polluting industries can be significantly alleviated by virtue of changing the conventional generation energy. Additionally, it is necessary when the national blueprint can be set forth for a clean energy economy. Secondly, to contribute to environmental preservation, the residents should buy cars with the energy-saving appliances such as electronic cars. Furthermore, the commuters should replace from using private vehicles to public transportation, which play a crucial role for diminishing the dusty smoke.
In conclusion, although there are various problems regarding human activities, which lead to the global warming, the authority and individuals should take actions to tackle these issues.
- Some people think the government should spend money on faster means of public transport However others think money should be spent on other priorities such as the environment Discuss both views and give your own opinion 78
- People in the current generation are not fit and active This will cause health problems in the future What could be the reasons for the inactivity and suggest solutions for this issue 84
- Television sporting shows such as Olympics to motivate the youth who do not like to exercise much Do you agree or disagree 70
- 2 Because of modern technology some people believe that it is no longer necessary for people to learn handwriting skills but others believe that handwriting is still an important skill Discuss both views 67
- Some people think that they can go to the gym to remain fit while others think that there are other better ways to do this Discuss both views 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 223, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...t and the individuals should take steps the mitigate these potential problems. There are...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, nevertheless, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.8503649635 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20467260021 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653284671533 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6965797375 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.5 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.85714285714 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143405356795 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0429950973793 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344275255133 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0905821382928 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297061763981 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.65 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.46 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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