Some people think that they can go to the gym to remain fit, while others think that there are other better ways to do this. Discuss both views
Nowadays, the societies are more and more innovative, so the importance of health is given top priority to reach the balance in life. It is thought that hitting the gym is the best way to keep fit, whereas others believe that there are various ways to strengthen human’s health.
On the one hand, the opinion to joining in the fitness club is attractive for several reasons. Firstly, sport centers are the ideal places for people to do exercise thanks to the direct instructions from the specialized couch. It means that the sportman have an obvious bodybuilding plan in terms of what are appropriate for them. Secondly, a wide range of modern sport facilities such as treadmills, barbells or electronic machines which absolutely facilitate the process of practice. Therefore, these types of machines are a motivation to inspire the participants going to the fitness centers frequently by virtual of numerous exercise tutorials.
On the other hand, there are the variety of methods for staying healthy in terms of doing exercise with online lessons and carrying out daily activities. One reason is that work-out at home is not only time-saving, but also flexible for those who do not have enough time to join in a fitness club. Furthermore, virtual lessons are suitable for each person’s physical state that people can suffer from muscle pain owning to over-exercising. Another reason is that individuals are able to eliminate excess body fat thanks to physically demanding jobs. A clear example of this point is that maintenance and repair workers furnish tools, materials or even clean the work area, so they do not need extra time at the gym because of the characteristics of their jobs.
In conclusion, it seems evident that both taking regular exercise at the fitness centers and doing other physical activities have their own unique advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, whereas, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13815789474 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81292894544 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608552631579 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.6560918067 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 120.153846154 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3846153846 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2307692308 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180264135999 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561581566701 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533969691318 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108419943651 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02867522894 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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