Global Warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what measure can government and individuals take to tackle the issue?
To embark with, global warming is the long -life heating of earth climate system ,due to ,human activities -human use fossil fuel in vehicles and the smoke of vehicles increase heat - trapping problems on atmosphere. moreover cutting down tree is direct effects on atmosphere. Global Warming happens when carbon dioxide and other air pollutants effects on see level . For an example, people are using a electrical items : air conditioner and refrigerator, inside there gizmos use a HFC gas - hydro fluorocarbons it is effect on ozone layer and directly drop upon Earth, Owing to that, people suffer In lot of diseases : Zombie,Cholera, Eyes problems.
On the other hand , there some preventive measure of defense global temperature. Individuals should utilize granary and plans to make ozone layer stronger . Apart from that , people ought to use public transport compared to own vehicle save fuel and decline air pollution. Moreover government ought to Increase price of fossil fuel and give advice use CFC gas - Chlorofluorocarbons use In gizmos. For an Evidence , the government of India more focus On plantation, fuels, less air pollution and less uses of harmful gas because of that, ozone layer become stronger and less patent vis - a- vis other nations.
To conclusion, people should use public transport and companies are less using hazardous gas due to that, people can control global hitting and stop the diseases which made by the global warming.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, apart from, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1221.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26293103448 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83277666216 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620689655172 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
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Chars per sentence: 122.1 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472533590895 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458406152747 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0765514916886 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0148620030168 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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