The government has announced that it plans to build a new university. Somepeople think that your community would be a good place to locate theuniversity. Compare the advantages and disadvantages of a new university in your community,
Education is the most powerful weapon which we can use to change the world. Some people argue that building the new university in our community provides numerous benefits. In this essay we will discuss the pros and cons in building a new university in our local community.
From one side, there are many benefits in building a new university in our community. Firstly, building a university means bringing a lot of students to our community. They spend their leisure time in our community. It helps to boost the local business and the unemployment rate will also decrease in our community. Secondly, if the new university is built in our community it helps the young people in our community to get a higher education and gain more knowledge. the illiterate ratio will decrease in our community. For instance, in Madurai before 1990 the literacy rate was very low after the Annamalai university was built in 1993 after that the literacy rate of Madurai became very high. Finally, a new university helps to meet new people and develop relationships with them.
From another side, building a new university has some disadvantages also, building a new university is a long process. A new construction means more traffic, noise and pollution. Most of the people come from nearby cities to run business here, so it will be very noisy and crowded. As a result we may not be able to enjoy the quiet and clean environment as a presence.
To sum up, every coin has both sides. Building a new university has both advantages and disadvantages. But the advantages would far outweigh the disadvantages. I strongly believe that building a new university helps the young people to get higher education and gain more knowledge.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, for instance, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98620689655 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85781986204 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472413793103 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2136840648 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.1052631579 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2631578947 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42105263158 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289900461142 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105520583992 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0984937956945 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202398474352 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0179896238988 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.07 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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