Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Some people opined that monetary funds put into the art sector which includes music and theatre is unnecessary and these resources should be diverted to public services instead. I do not agree with this. I strongly believe that the art sector is worth investing in as it provides major health benefits and also serves as a source of employment and revenue to some people and the government respectively.
Art is a major part of culture which has been defined as the way of life of group of people. The government seeks to look after the well-being of its populace and thus must never neglect arts which have been found to be a good way of relieving stress and tension in the human body which has negative long term impact on people’s health. For instance, going to the cinemas and comedy concerts on saturday after a long week of professional activities can help a person reduce stress to the barest minimum and investment in this sector by the government will in turn prolong the lifespan of its workforce i.e. productive population.
Also, arts and culture is the means of employment and livelihood for some people like the artists, dancers, actors and actresses to mention a few, it also brings in a lot of revenue and profit for the government that invests in it. Government of major film industries in the world can attest to these, for example, Hollywood in USA, Bollywood in India and even Nollywood in Nigeria is not left out. Income made from these industries can go a long way in boosting the economy of a country.
In conclusion, public services are important in any society but arts also should not be relegated as it forms the basis of every culture and people. Government should be encouraged to invest into arts and professionals who specialize in the different forms of art and entertainment should direct the affairs of the sector to ensure that monetary resources from the treasury are utilized judiciously.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 401, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the treasury are utilized judiciously.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86144578313 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71190073087 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527108433735 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.4292532329 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.727272727 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1818181818 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171280477932 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814565390231 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860428298846 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109813710923 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524997164766 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.