The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease the level of violent crime in society. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, in order to increase dramatic factors, adding some horror and violent scenes into films is becoming a prevalent trend among all the renowned directors. It acts as a precursor of some public arguments that whether these scenes should be controlled by the governments to limit the violent actions in real life. I totally agree with this view and I am discussing some reasons why governments had better enact regulations about the violent sector in films and television in this essay.
It can be immediately obvious that society is affected deeply because of the popular violent trend in some films and television programs. People in modern society are easier to find and watch some films and TV than in previous times thanks to the development of science and technology. This social advantage does more harm than good because violent scenes on the TV and the internet can be accessed to a limitless extent at any time. People can be evoked some intrinsic motivation leading to some evil actions in real-life because of seeing violence continuously and relentlessly. For example, any person who watches a bad behavior on TV tends to imitate and does this action with his wife, children, even the inferior staff of his company. All these effects cause an increase in the number of crimes, which bring large and deep risks to our sociality.
The above-mentioned trend in some series of thrilling films not only affects adults’ actions but also children's mental health. It is a major contributor to the huge fears and obsessions of children, which makes them always anxious, frustrated. Moreover, it indirectly affects the study results, slows down the improvement process of children, and has wrong awareness of violence.
In conclusion, because of the tremendous above-mentioned effects and adverse consequences, I am convinced that the government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease the level of violent crime in society.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1663.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14860681115 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83118767518 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569659442724 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1589323245 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.923076923 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8461538462 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23076923077 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251844242821 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854038343696 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116124564873 0.0667982634062 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187196997422 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.161586875986 0.056905535591 284% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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