Government should make laws about people’s nutrition and food choices. Others argue that it is their choice. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Eating habit and nutrition intake have been becoming common issues nowadays. Many people believe that government ought to pass laws about inhabitants’ nutrition and their opting for food, whereas others believe that people have their right choosing their owns. However, I presume that their is an alternative action satisfying both points of view.
Making laws about nutrition intake and food choices is beneficial in some ways. Firstly, by following laws, people may boost the community’s health. It is due to the fact that most of people who have a busy day of working, tend to consume more ready - made food for its conveniences. However, this kind of food may contain lots of food additives to ensure preserving food longer, which could put bad effects on people’s long - term health. Therefore, it seems evident that laws could prepare inhabitants wealthy health through controlling their food intake.
Nevertheless, people should be given the leeway to decide what kind of foods they consume., provided that their opts are not illegal or cause harm to others. Therefore, it would be unjustifiable for the government to interfere with it.
According to my point of view, instead of making laws about people’s nutrition and food intake or let them choose their own flavors, national council should intensify more campaigns associating with knowledge of food choice and nutrition so as to improve inhabitants’ awareness of their health originating from their food intake.
In conclusion, while their are several arguments about people’s nutrition and food choices. I strongly believe that their is better way to satisfy both views.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 286, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...ing their owns. However, I presume that their is an alternative action satisfying bot...
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Line 2, column 177, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...ty’s health. It is due to the fact that most of people who have a busy day of working, tend to...
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Line 4, column 239, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... knowledge of food choice and nutrition so as to improve inhabitants’ awareness of their...
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Line 5, column 22, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...heir food intake. In conclusion, while their are several arguments about people’s nu...
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Line 5, column 116, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...d food choices. I strongly believe that their is better way to satisfy both views.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, whereas, while, as to, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34230769231 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73356263218 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.6710020627 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.846153846 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.404602535926 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138624982369 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10526596058 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229375963277 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0783659395493 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 286, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...ing their owns. However, I presume that their is an alternative action satisfying bot...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 177, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...ty’s health. It is due to the fact that most of people who have a busy day of working, tend to...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 239, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... knowledge of food choice and nutrition so as to improve inhabitants’ awareness of their...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 22, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...heir food intake. In conclusion, while their are several arguments about people’s nu...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 116, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...d food choices. I strongly believe that their is better way to satisfy both views.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, whereas, while, as to, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34230769231 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73356263218 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.6710020627 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.846153846 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.404602535926 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138624982369 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10526596058 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229375963277 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0783659395493 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.