Government should spend money on railways rather than roads.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
With economic development, railways has lost its popularity now-a-days. Some opine that ruling bodies should give preference to railways for investing money that roads. In my opinion the government should equally invest in both.
Rail lines were a popular means of transportation in past, when people had little money on them. Some think that government can bring a change in this trend by investing in this means. More usage of rails will cause less amount of polltion.Thus benefiting the environment. Since it can carry bulk of people to longer distance from one place to another in one go. In addition, less expenses will be utilized to expand this means of transport which further can be distributed for other social causes like sanitation, education etc. As far as expenses are concerned general public will need to spend less money for reaching their destinations.
On the other hand,road systems are also required for intracity connections. These need to be in good place for easy movement of public as well as private vehicles. As damaged roads lead to accidents very often which is even more dangerous. Although, more the number of roads,more will be the number of vehicles running on them. Hence the negative impact on environment ,yet, these also require attention. Since roads are advantageous for reaching somewhere on time within shorter distance.
Since, both modes of transport have their importance and its government 's responsibility for the development of the nation. Therefore, funds should be equally allocated for both means of transportation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, so, therefore, thus, well, in addition, in short, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31075697211 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88149458846 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617529880478 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.6624181901 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.4117647059 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7647058824 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58823529412 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124336907251 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408490474012 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047188044927 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0846696709344 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691195754386 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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