The government should spend more money on medical research to protect citizens’ health rather than on protecting the environment. Do you agree or disagree?
It is thought that the government should spend more investion on medical problem to protect individuals's health than on protecting the enviroment. From my point of view, in some situation i mostly agree with this notion because of its benefits for the population life. The following essay will analyse this statement in detail.
First of all, in the industrialized world and with the appearence of modern technology that numerous dangerous disease have appeared more frequenly which lead demerits affection for the society such as viruss or batery, so medical research is greatly significant for the people life. Not only will this trend provide valuable pain or appropriate method for people which improve their mentaily life of adolesence, but also the immune systerm will be increase gradually, advanced the economic background of their country. Furthermore, the propotion of death people can be reduced dramatically. To illustrate, there was a vurvey by Tim Lockey, the famous interviewer and professor, which was about the success of european nations where the government were concentrate in the medical problem. The statistic demonstrated that nearly every countries has got plenty of achievement.
However, we can not negate the drawback of this phenomenon when compare with enviroment trouble. Nowadays pollution asmostphere is really dangerous for the society which have a lot of weakness effect for our life such as green house problem. Moreover, many governments take advantage from this investment for their own revenue, various harmful influence will be led by this action to the young generation.
To conclude, though by agrument from the essay, i totally agree with this statement, but it still have some negative aspects for the society. The state need to have clear plans to improve their citizens for the nation's development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, so, still, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39100346021 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83171856743 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63321799308 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.6739103865 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.846153846 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131609043513 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051917998401 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116333914899 0.0667982634062 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0946939214347 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101966280328 0.056905535591 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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