Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In recent years, along with the economic development, the number of private transportation has also continuously increased. This caused many serious problems such as traffic jams, air pollution, traffic accident,… which directly affect to our life. Therefore, from now I think goverment should invest more in building railways system instead of construct more roads for cars and motorbike. Today assesment will give the reason why people need more railways and the advantages which a good railways system can bring to our life.
Firstly, because of the high population in cities, most of people chose to live in the suburbs outside the city, they have to travel long way to work. So that high speed railways can help them save time to travel, they can go to work and comeback home in the same day without having to rent acccomodation near their workplaces.
Moreover, using railways also help people to solve the question of parking area and parking cost which are more extremely difficult in cities. Office workers will not have to worry about their vehicles and companies will save parking allowances.
Secondly, building more modern railways systems and encourage people to travel by public transportation can help reduce problems caused by private transportation. For example, less cars and motorbikes less traffic jams during rush hours, less gasoiline vehicles less air pollution. People will be safe even when they are drunk if they choose to travel by trains.
Finally, paying attention to build railways will bring to people good values in the future. Such as saving the government’s cost for managing transport facility, people can experience fast, cheap, comfortable and safety public transportations.
In conclusion, because of the importance of public transportations in modern life, goverment should invest more in constructing railways than roads to make long lasting advantages for their citizens.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , …
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'railways'' or 'railway's'?
Suggestion: railways'; railway's
...overment should invest more in building railways system instead of construct more roads...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'railways'' or 'railway's'?
Suggestion: railways'; railway's
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun cars is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
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Suggestion:
...will be safe even when they are drunk if they choose to travel by trains. Fina...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4219269103 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82546762375 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578073089701 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1566974488 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.571428571 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0944977303189 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0343732186883 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330543667189 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.053229709035 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041568365706 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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