The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with prediction for 2030 and 2040.
Summarise the information by selection and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the percentage of total population in four distinct Asian cities between 1970 and 2020, in addition by forecasting for 2030 and 2040.
It is obvious that all cities have slight increased trend throughout the period from 1970 to 2020 and it will continue until 2040. The rate of papulation in Indonesia in two points across Thailand and Philippines ordered in 200 and 2010.
As can be seen, Malaysia has increase gradually during this period about 50% and the peak point of is in 2040 by more than 80%. After two years that the population rate in Philippines did not change a lot suddenly raise around 20% form nearly 31% in 1990 and then decline until 2010 and has slight growth in remain years and will continue till 2040. Thailand has a minor surge in the first three decades from under 20% to 27% and after that has plagued trend for four consecutive decades to 2020 and statistical shows it will grow more than 18% until 2040. The situation was different in Indonesia this cities has the lowest rate among other cities in the first year by 15% and increased approximately 10% where reached the rate of Thailand in 2000 and by 2010 the percentage of this city has equaled with Philippines and in the last remain year raised fortunately this trend will go on to 2040. Indonesia will locate in second place by more than 50% of total population.
As a result, the Indonesia has a significant growth during these years and cross two other city.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 599, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...he situation was different in Indonesia this cities has the lowest rate among other ...
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Line 4, column 92, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'city' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'cities'.
Suggestion: cities
... during these years and cross two other city.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, then, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1216.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67692307692 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43329955936 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511538461538 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 348.3 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.2491559745 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.111111111 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8888888889 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172833503468 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783209431377 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0950311086996 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130013576374 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115629281811 0.056905535591 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.44 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.46 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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