The graph below shows the percentage of people going to cinemas in one European country on different days. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given graph elucidates the proportion of cinema goers in an unknown European country during a week over the span of 3 years commencing from 2003.
Overall, it is immediately apparent that while the figure for people going to cinemas on Friday reaches a plateau, that on the other experience fluctuating patterns over the given timeframe. Another striking feature is that the percentage of people visiting on Saturday generally exceed that on the other six days.
When it comes to the first four days of the week on which the proportion of cinema goers in three years generally lies below 20%, that on Tuesday comes top of the list, with the apex of 20% in the year 2003. As that on Monday and Thursday experience upward trends to 13% and approximately 20% respectively, that on Tuesday and Wednesday undergo mere and staggering declines by 4% and 10%, in turn.
Turning to the three remainders, it is evident that the largest percentage of people go to cinemas on Saturday, towering at the zenith of 45%. Whereas Saturday and Sunday hover around 42% and 32% in the figure for cinema goers, that on Friday stagnates at 30%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 945.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 195.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84615384615 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60881023865 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558974358974 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 506.74238477 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 32.975562999 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.0 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8571428571 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165210058335 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739125783434 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435867358568 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0958405615383 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297227872062 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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