the growing number of overweight
Nowadays, the number of overweight people is growing minute by minute. This situation is quite alarming. In this condition,some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. I agree absolutely.
Overweight is state which people become fater, slower than in the past.Morever, your health is also effected negatively. Reasons lead to that are fast food, soda, lubricating oil,chocolate, candy, sugar, sweet cake,.... All of them are delicous, appetiing, people cann't resist it easily. Addition, parents's overindulgement is also the reason make overweight increasing rapidly.
Overweight is not good for your health. It causes many diseases for healthy. Your physical appearances will be changed passively. You will fater, higher than once. From that point, you will become inferiority, depression.
To improve this statement, the first is improve your knowledge. Physical education lessons should be accepted in the school for students such as : how to protect your health, how to ameliorate your stature, the disadvantage of overweight...... Moreover, you should aware of management yourself to improve stature and preserve your health. Parents should limited indulge their children.
To conclude, when these ways are introduced in the school curriculum. The variety major of healthier, people will feel happier and more vigorous. Let's work together for public health
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...le will feel happier and more vigorous. Lets work together for public health
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, moreover, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1237.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 218.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67431192661 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98704136727 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633027522936 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 20.2975951904 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.4455189112 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.85 106.682146367 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.9 20.7667163134 52% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.7 7.06120827912 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153338268886 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467394935872 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117817153653 0.0667982634062 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0758140674873 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690082575995 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.87 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.42 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.1190380762 59% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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