To meet the growing need for food to support an increasing population, a country should make use of edible insects as a food source. However, some people believe that insects are not only unhealthy but harvesting them will also negatively affect nature. What are the benefits and drawbacks of eating insects?
Nowadays, due to the population boom, many individuals think that consuming edible insects is an effective way to satisfy the demands for food of humans. Although, there are some advantages of eating insects, I would opine that the drawbacks this trend brings about outweighs the benefits.
On the one hand, eating insects has some benefits. The first one stems from the need for food because crops cannot supply enough food for humans. For instance, in many African regions, due to the shortage of crops, many local inhabitants have to catch insects like cockroaches, crickets or grasshoppers to survive. If they did not use insects as a food resource, they would suffer from starvation . The second advantage is that many species of insects contain a huge amount of nutrition and minerals. To illustrate, the amount of protein per one kilogram of cockroach is much higher compared to that of pork.
On the other hand, there are some unfavorable impacts of considering insects as a food resource. Firstly, because some types of insects prefer to live in dirty environment, consuming these insects can be detrimental to the health of consumers. For example, if a person eats too much cockroach living in some dirty places, he can contract with many serious illnesses like stomach cancer. Moreover, if more insects are harvested to be fed up humans, the food chains of many animals relying on insects can be lost. Therefore, these animals can face with starvation. Then the fauna of the ecosystem will be influenecd negatively.
In conclusion, while it is believed that eating insects can be a suitable method to deal with food problems, this trend can put a great number of negative influences to not only the environment but also humans.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03806228374 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70882645896 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567474048443 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8124284751 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.06666666667 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271431338809 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921700755878 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628906384401 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165859502816 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0144719152164 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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