Emerging obesity ailments have been resulting more and more health cases in hospitials. Eventhough, a few people think addition of health education can cure it, other people opine, for troubleshooting this issue, other steps like awareness programmes mostly in rural areas, changing eating habits and physical workout is necessary.
At present , decline in health index rate is occuring due to obesity problems, mostly in youngsters. Furthermore, physical education lessons in studies can be blessing for student's wellfare to be physically hale and mentally strong. In these days , optimum children easily get attracted towards junk foods; if schools give them balanced diet information , they would stop intaking it. Additionally, recreational activities can encourage pupils for participating in sports events . With the help of sports functions , schoolars can be inspired to take games as career.
Meanwhile, exercises are mandatory to get rescue from over- weight by mantaining fittness. Adding to it, Health awareness programmes or medical camps can help countryside people in case of little knowledge about fittness among residents. On the top of all, junk food consumption can be considered as root cause due to presence of artifical spicies and edible oil. Thus, people have to understand significance of proper eating habits . If possible, home made food should be waved without adding refind oils and with full cleanliness.
As far as my prospective, implementation of health education in curriculum can be used to cure obesity, while for suffering people other measures must be taken place for prevention.
In conclusion, fat people ought to relish balanced food , attend health related programmes and do more workout , health eduction also be promoted in educational instututes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, thus, well, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66420664207 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99634717213 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.678966789668 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9218502081 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.642857143 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21428571429 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189496382542 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624557356058 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567343488171 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120739461814 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054715004142 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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