A popular prospective is that folks prefer to do shopping according their age group rather than another circumstance. However, i disagree with it because other factors like financial power and personal interest also varies while shopping.
It is true that purchasing choice is depends upon age group and requirement. A evidence of this is, mostly infants usually buy toys and candies , while more probability of buying outfits and technological gadgets has found among youngster. Similarly, aged prople spent optimum money upon recreational activities for fittness. Thus, there is a fixed necessity for different age groups. Moreover, money is the supreme commodity in this materialistic world to purchase goods.
Finance , undoubtedly every product has it's fixed price , which can be purchase by raising equal amount of money. Additionally , in this case age does not matter because everyone has to paid same price to get goods . To illustrate, vegetables cost price is same for whole public ; if they have money, they can buy it. Likewise, personal interests does not bother the ages . If a old man willing to go use smartphone for social networking , no- one can stop him to purchase it. Hence , conbination of various factors generate a demand and to fulfil it financial support is mandatory.
As per my prospective, it is foolish to say shopping habits rely upon age groups , in reality various factors affect it.
In conclusion, age difference are not only formost factor for people shopping habits, for satisfaction; money and own interest should be essential.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, likewise, moreover, similarly, so, thus, while, as to, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30522088353 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89828460757 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.686746987952 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.3428219406 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.0666666667 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184900470505 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588446729146 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562280400778 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109494340426 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462500518748 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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